沁园春·再次韵
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元代]：周权
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混沌凿开，天险巍巍，东岩峻兮。是云髓凝成，半空高矗，天风吹裂，一线中开。妙出神功，高擎仙界，鸟道疑当太白西。凭高处，见云嘘岩腹，鼓舞风雷。
笔蘸天河，手扪象纬，笑傲风云入壮题。摩苍壁，扫龙蛇醉墨，翔舞徘徊。
沁园春·再次韵译文及注释
译文
巍巍的东岩，壁立千仞，石壁夹道，峻极中天，仿佛是在混沌天宇中，由造物主凿开的一天险；它高矗云天，又象是奔腾飞驰的“云髓”聚集凝成。天风将它吹裂，一线中开。它高耸入天际，仅飞鸟可通，而东岩的鸟道又仿佛太白西边的鸟道一样高峻。身处高山之巅，目之所及只到山的中部，云雾吞吐竟响如风雷。
脚蹬被桃花香染过的登山鞋，阔步快速地奔向青云，进入月宫，高折蟾宫一枝桂树。笔蘸着天河之水，手摸着星辰日月，来题写心中的风云意气。在“苍壁”上挥洒着大笔，如龙蛇翔舞，左右奔腾！
注释
太白：即秦岭的太乙峰。
擎：往上托；举。
象纬：日月五星。
参考资料：
1、古诗文网经典传承志愿小组．白马非马译注，作者邮箱：930331075@qq.com
沁园春·再次韵鉴赏
落花香染桃鞋。快阔步青云志壮哉。便万里孤骞，超人间世，一枝高折，作月中梯。
这实在是一篇奇作。在中国词史上，写山水的词作罕有其匹。词咏四川资中县的东岩。东岩形似剖盎，侧立千尺，溪壑深杳，东岩在蜀中，词人似乎有意要与蜀人李太白《蜀道难》一争高低，词也的确有太白雄风。
本词第一奇在构思，用奇特的想象，从虚处着笔，把东岩写得极富传奇色彩和动态的力度美。巍巍的东岩，壁立千仞，石壁夹道，峻极中天，仿佛是在混沌天宇中，由造物主“凿开”的一道“天险”；它高矗云天，又象是奔腾飞驰的“云髓”聚焦“凝成”；它中开一线，又是怎样形成？原来是“天风”将它“吹裂”所致。“凿开”、“凝成”、“吹裂”、“中开”四词，力可扛鼎。词人不从东岩现存的静态形象着笔，而是展开想象，从它的“生成”过程入手，把一座静态的，也许在常人看来极为普通的山岩写得奔腾驰骤，气势磅礡。巍巍天险，被词人玩赏于股掌之上，戏弄于笔端之下，写来毫不费力。而写就的东岩风云奔走，极富于运动感和力度美，确实让人赞叹大自然的鬼斧“神功”。南宋大词人辛疾疾竹的山也够富于运动感和气势的了，“叠嶂西驰，万马回旋，众山欲东。”（《沁园春·灵山齐庵赋时筑偃湖未成》）群峰叠嶂，犹如万马回旋，向东奔驰。但比较而言，辛弃疾词仍是从现实的可见的意象进行构思取譬，而本词则完全是凭想象，从虚处非现实化的意象着笔构思。论气势力度，二词平分秋色；但论浪漫色彩和想象之奇，辛词不能不让一着。“高擎”二句，仍写东岩之高入云天仙界，但用一“擎”字，便又写出其动态和力度。“擎”有支撑、托住之意。仿佛让人觉得仙界向下重压，而东岩则撑持向上顶住，既写出和东岩的高度，又表现出了它的力度。如把“擎”字换一“入”字或“耸”字，动感和力度就无法表现出来了。“鸟道”一句，语出李白《蜀道难》：“西当太白有鸟道，可以横绝峨嵋巅。”太白，即秦岭的太乙峰。词意谓东岩之高仅飞鸟可通，而东岩的鸟道又仿佛太白西边的鸟道一样高峻。
“擎仙界”、“矗半空”的东岩已经高不可攀了，可词人仍然设想“凭高”，去俯视东岩的“云嘘岩腹，鼓舞风雷”。山高，人更高——不，是词人的“心高”，想象力高。西方美学论崇高美，认为崇高来自于审美主体对大自然的敬畏。本词也富于崇高美，而崇高美感的来源恰恰相反，它产生于审美主体对大自然力量、气势的把握。词人面对巍巍高峻的东岩，不是敬畏恐惧，而是产生征服、戏弄它的豪气。无论是中国画还是中国古典诗歌中，写高山，总离不开云，因为中国艺术家们已总结出这样的规律：“山之精神写不出，以云雾写之。”即通过云雾的缭绕来烘托山的高峻。
比如唐代诗人兼画家于一身的王维就很懂得这个理，他写终南山的高，就写道：“白云回望合，青霭入看无。”杜甫写泰山也有“荡胸生层云”之句。欧阳修《醉翁亭记》写琅玡山也写到“云归而岩穴瞑”。但比较一下本词所写的“云嘘岩腹，鼓舞风雷”便可看出，上述诗文中的云都是轻飘飘的云，而本词中的云却是奔腾驰骋的云。“鼓舞风雷”，不仅写出了岩腹吞云吐雾的强烈运动感和力量，而且写出“云嘘”雾吐时轰烈的声响效果。云雾吞吐竟响如风雷，只有在豪杰之士的笔下才有这般气势。
本词第二奇在奇情壮采，豪气逸兴。词人面对巍巍东岩，逸兴遄飞，“志壮”凌云。我们仿佛见着他脚蹬被桃花香染过的登山鞋，阔步快速地奔向青云，进入月宫，高折蟾宫一枝桂树。“快阔步”、“便孤骞”、（高举）、“超”（越）几个连续快速的动作，充分表现出词人心胸内沸腾的激情，“疏狂”的豪气。他写景富于动态、力度，写情同样富于动态，力度、气势。诵读时，“快阔步”五句要一口气读下去，体会其声情，才能品味出其中强烈的节奏感。由强烈的节奏感又可进一步体会词人心灵快速激烈的律动。
“笔蘸天河，手扪象纬，笑傲风云入壮题”，狂豪、奇壮无以复加！读此三句，似乎觉得当代郭沫若先生《站在地球边上放歌》也不那么奇特了，又感到诗仙李白“兴酣笔落摇五岳，诗成笑傲凌沧州”（《江上吟》）、“俱怀逸兴壮思习，欲上青天揽明月”也不是独一无二的“惊天地、泣鬼神”了。“象纬”，指日月五星。词人竟然要手摸着星辰日月，笔蘸着天河之水，来题写他的风云意气，世间有几个如许的狂人！南宋张孝祥《念奴娇·过洞庭》之“尽挹西江，细斟北斗，万象为宾客”，也同样具有囊括宇宙的气概，但作一“细”字，觉得气势的力量稍嫌不足，不似本词气势奔腾直下，一泄千里。结尾紧承上意，写他“笔蘸天河，手扪象纬”，在“苍壁”上挥洒着大笔，如龙蛇翔舞，左右奔腾！我这支秃笔已无法形容周权那奇特的想象力和壮浪纵恣的豪气，只觉得他不是胸吞宇宙，气盖乾坤就无法写出这样的奇作。
我们还必须注意到这是一首“再次韵”之作。“次韵”，用韵有严格规定，不能超越变更原作的韵脚，这已经限制创作的思维了。而刚用原韵写过一首（原题《次韵王尹赋东岩》），再度用原韵写作，就无异于戴着脚镣手铐跳舞，而周权却偏偏跳得如此潇洒，如此自在，如此欢腾，可见他惊人的才气。
全词由奇景而生奇情。上阙从东岩的“凝成”写到它的“中开”和吞云吐雾的气势；下阙从“阔步”登天写到他月中折桂和在苍壁上挥舞“龙蛇”。全词一气呵成，气势奔注，而不作腾挪跌宕。词以气势胜，才不觉得词中屡用的“天险”、“天风”、“天河”、“风雷”、“风云”、“青云”、“云髓”、“云嘘”等意象有重复之感。词中用词造句之避与不避，取决于创作主体能否驾驭词的气势和语言，未可一概而论。
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散拙亦自遂，粗将猿鸟同。飞泉高泻月，独树迥含风。
果落盘盂上，云生箧笥中。未甘明圣日，终作钓渔翁。
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阅见一十首 其三
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金朝：
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边元鼎
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凤纸衔封玉镜台，绣鸾传记已相猜。倾城笑脸千金样，莫对閒人一例开。
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重阳侍老人饮
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宋代：
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陈文蔚
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九十慈亲鬓发播，今年菊早去年花。
一尊细说重阳事，似此清欢有几家。
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瑞峰院夜语奉酬郑簿
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宋代：
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林亦之
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百级上层峦，呼镫同所欢。
瓷杯真有道，行李似无官。